When the old billionaire announced he was giving all his money away, reporters from all over the world including: China, Mexico, and Japan flocked over to question him; to their surprise however he presented them with only a single question of his own, “Do you think I could possibly take all that money to the grave?” he asked them with a smile, and then left the podium.
I think this is 90% grammatically correct.
I know there's should be another comma after the quotation somewhere and i played with the semi colon and colon too much.
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